I like this version better than the other, because the text is easier to read and connects much better with the rest through its texture. To me it means "No matter how fucked up your sitiuation is right now, you're not going to get your job done by exploding or simply cracking!". It's kind of a "the show must go on" motivations I guess. Hollywood has a lot of high-pressure jobs in my eyes and people suffering from burn out are seen as colleteral damage.
Thanks for your feedback- I've been wanting to hear which one works better for people. And yes, this piece is most definitely based on my current situation in LA starting out my production design career.